Editing my Writing - Tick as you go
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Title of your writing -
Have I read it ‘out loud’?
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to a partner?
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Does it make sense?
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to a partner?
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Do I need to add anything, so the reader can really ‘see’ what I mean?
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Do my sentences begin in different ways?
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Have I included complex sentences?
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Have I included different types of sentences? (i.e. speech, exclamations, questions)
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Do I need to delete anything?
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Have I included interesting vocab in every paragraph?
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Have I checked my punctuation?
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Do I have capitals to begin all of my sentences?
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No capitals in the middle of my sentences?
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Capitals if there is a special name of a thing or place or person?
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Do all my sentences end with a fullstop or a question mark or an exclamation mark ?
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Have I used commas where they are needed to show a pause or breath or an extra idea?
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Have I included speech marks where I have written the things people have said?
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Have I checked my spelling?
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Have I corrected all of the spelling mistakes?
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Have I read through all of my writing as a final check?
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‘‘Kia ora’’said Aroha as these people walked in the hall.This person named Lucky he had facial expressions on his face and eyes.When they started their performance I saw the man do his pukana face.
They picked 3 warriors to come but they had copy Jordan.It went easy and hard Mr Goodwin he was acting funny.As they started to perform part 2 of the story they came with powerful voices that echoed around the hall. As they sang and danced they had perfectly pitched harmonies .
Finally the show was over. I like how they had to copy Jordan but Lucky he was the funniest. My friend in the front of me he was the first one to spot his googly eyes .
Here is a diagram of a Gaelic foot pitch 