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Monday 25 November 2013

Adding Detail To Sentenses

At Camp Bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.



Mr Jacobsen was our coach for an activity called the confidence course.



Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course and he told everyone to be calm.




It is fun doing sailing but I was nervous about sailing on camp.


I was nervous about going to do sailing on camp.


I was nervous about sailing on camp and I nearly tipped over.



I tried and I We went abseiling.


We went abseiling and when you come down Its so easy.



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