Kuhu-Rangi

Editing my Writing - Tick as you go

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Have I read it ‘out loud’?	to myself v	to a partner?
Does it make sense?	to myself ?	to a partner?
Do I need to add anything, so the reader can really ‘see’ what I mean?	V	N
Do my sentences begin in different ways?	x	N
Have I included complex sentences?	V	Y
Have I included different types of sentences? (i.e. speech, exclamations, questions)	v	Y
Do I need to delete anything?	x	Y
Have I included interesting vocab in every paragraph?	v	N
Have I checked my punctuation?	v	Y
Do I have capitals to begin all of my sentences?	v	Y
No capitals in the middle of my sentences?	v	Y
Capitals if there is a special name of a thing or place or person?	v	Y
Do all my sentences end with a fullstop or a question mark or an exclamation mark ?	v	Y
Have I used commas where they are needed to show a pause or breath or an extra idea?	v	N
Have I included speech marks where I have written the things people have said?	v	Y
Have I checked my spelling?	v	N
Have I corrected all of the spelling mistakes?	v	N
Have I read through all of my writing as a final check?	v

‘‘Kia ora’’said Aroha as these people walked in the hall.This person named Lucky he had facial expressions on his face and eyes.When they started their performance I saw the man do his pukana face.

They picked 3 warriors to come but they had copy Jordan.It went easy and hard Mr Goodwin he was acting funny.As they started to perform part 2 of the story they came with powerful voices that echoed around the hall. As they sang and danced they had perfectly pitched harmonies .

Finally the show was over. I like how they had to copy Jordan but Lucky he was the funniest. My friend in the front of me he was the first one  to spot his googly eyes .