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Friday, 15 August 2014

Damien Algebra


Trianglessticks
13
25
37
49
511
613
715
817
919
1021
1123
1225
1327
1429
1531
This is a pattern with matchsticks we worked out that to find out how many you need per a triangle, the  rule for the patten is (N x 2)+1.so for 20 fish (N=20).(20x2)+1=41

Kuhu-Rangi

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‘‘Kia ora’’said Aroha as these people walked in the hall.This person named Lucky he had facial expressions on his face and eyes.When they started their performance I saw the man do his pukana face.


They picked 3 warriors to come but they had copy Jordan.It went easy and hard Mr Goodwin he was acting funny.As they started to perform part 2 of the story they came with powerful voices that echoed around the hall. As they sang and danced they had perfectly pitched harmonies .


Finally the show was over. I like how they had to copy Jordan but Lucky he was the funniest. My friend in the front of me he was the first one  to spot his googly eyes .










Monday, 11 August 2014

The player hit Te Tupu well concentrating and focus. Well defending and dodging with a accurate aim the player hit Te Tupu. After a day of playing we were Exhausted and drained and running out of energy. Working as a team to get as many hits as they can to be the winner.

Ki-O-Rihi the game

Clutching the ball tightly powerfully striking the Te Tupu. Eyes wide opened and running with the ball the player hit the Te Tupu. Leapted into there air powerfully hiting the Te Tupu.

Zooming around the field trying to get away from the defenders.Well finding a way with there strategy and skillfulness the player hit Te Tupu. Impact well dodging the Opponents the player hit Te Tupu with a powerful aim.

The player hit Te Tupu well concentrating and focus. Well defending and dodging with a accurate aim the player hit Te Tupu. After a day of playing we were Exhausted and drained and running out of energy. Working as a team to get as many hits as they can to be the winner.




You have to score has much points you have good thronging to score points

Friday, 8 August 2014

Article about Usain bolt

Usain bolt is the  world's fastest man .He is a  Jamaican sprinter is nick name is lighting bolt he was born in 21 August that means he is 27 years old
his hight is {6 ft 5 in 196 cm} his weight is 94 kg in the commonwealth games he has won 1 gold

Friday, 1 August 2014

Damien Algebra

4 sixs and 1 8 the tail of the other fish is begening of auother fish






Drumming at assembly

As me and Mohammed walk into the hall. We seen some drums on the stage There was wooden drums that was the cook islands. Sergeant Brent had a drum kit.

Sergeant Brent played his drum kit first. He played a cool  beat then it went faster and louder. And he went on for a little bit then he stopped.


When The Cook Islands play their drums it was cool. These were much faster and much more louder than Sergeant Brent’s drum kit. But Sergeant brent one had a meaner beat then the Cook island drummers.


Sergeant Brent and the Cook island drummers  played together. But all I could hear was the Cook Island drum real fast then Sergeant  Brent move two drums to the Cook islands. Then Sergeant started to dance.I said to Mohammed ‘‘Mean beat’’